Stolen Kiss

Well I'll begin this critique off with stating that this piece iz excellent with only a nick or two in tha work, but through my opinion, I would start with bringing Vegeta'z dimple on hiz head down a tad and stretch it a little longer.

This part iznt much of a big deal but try making hiz forearm slightly narrower and add a little more depth to tha shading on tha table. Other than that I'd say this piece waz nicely thought out and very well portrayed.

You performed a swell job so keep up tha unique origanality of your work! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>